NEXT LEVEL

posted 26th Jan 2016, 10:31 AM

NEXT LEVEL
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26th Jan 2016, 10:31 AM

blackmoorpress

Sorry it's a little late this week, guys. We've been dealing with some stuff over here.

Anyways, here it is. The first real glimpse of Bloom!

Also let us know what you think about the second novel chunk below.

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Eek - Chunk 2

Whirling. Whirling winds in the forest. Stuff flying everywhere. A bright white flash of light and we’re somewhere else. Not really sure where. Smells different to home. It’s dark until my eyes can readjust. Hold on.
There we are. Right, where are we? Looks weird, smells weird. Is there a way out? No. Shit. Find somewhere to hide. Ok, ok, let’s try this thing. If we can squeeze right…. in…. there…. Perfect.

You know what? It’s nice and warm in here. It’s been dark for ages, but it must be night time wherever we are. We need to find a way out soon, but it’s safe for now. Let’s stick here for a bit.

Is there anything to eat around here? If i can just stick my head out and… aha! there’s some weird looking fruit over there. Let’s just grab one of those round things. And back in the hole.
It doesn’t taste as bad as it looks.

Let’s wait until morning to find a way out.

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26th Jan 2016, 12:35 PM

ratt

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26th Jan 2016, 1:06 PM

azureXtwilight

So beautiful.

Subbed!

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